Friday, October 17, 2014

The best part of me

My eyes are the best part of me. If you look at them they are brown in colour. They are not the best colour but I don't care, because they are the only eyes I have. Whenever I  open my eyes you can see them sparkling in the sun. But at night when I close them you can't see them at all.

My eyes help me see the beautiful world. When I wake up in the morning I can see all of my surroundings. When I go to school they help me see all of my friends. Coming home I see my parents and my brother and I  love that. Eyes have to be everyones favourite thing.

I dont know what I would do without my eyes because they help me see everything. Everyone needs eyes. I couldn't live without mine.  My eyes are my most beautiful thing. I only have one pair of eyes so I have to take care of them. No one has eyes exactly like mine.

1 comment:

  1. Fantastic descriptive writing, Kyra. Your eyes are special.I love the second paragraph about seeing the beautiful world, your friends and family.